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friggin leaves

an angryku

By John CoxPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
American Gothic, detail, Grant Wood, 1930, The Art Institute of Chicago

friggin leaves to rake

pumpkin in everything

smelly potpourri

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John Cox

Twisted teller of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Aint got none of that.

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  • Aarish3 months ago

    This angryku perfectly captures that late-fall frustration! I could almost smell the pumpkin spice and feel the piles of leaves underfoot.

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    Angryku sounds like something I'd write - this was hilarious. Even if I don't necessarily agree. Pot Pourri, like Hannah, I remember that...but not for a couple of decades lol. Not a fan of pumpkin spiced season, John? Wanna know something - this likely shows my curmuggeony old bastard side - I hate that people call it "pumpkin spice season". I'm petty. True. But why can't we just enjoy the occasional pumpkin spice latte without it becoming a season... Anyway. I loved that you used American Gothic. Interesting take on one of those highly debated subject matters. Fine work sir, fine work. Grumpy asshole. Also, here is me being a grumpy asshole lol -Wanted to remind you of the book and ask you to look at the most recent piece and update on progress and the next step involving your input - a bio. Thanks. https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/vocal-poetry-anthology-progress-update-and-requests-part-two%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    You definitely nailed the angryku. Love the title. This art piece. The look on their faces. Tells me that these would be their exact words. Its too much leaves to rake. Lol. Even the hatred for the pumpkin. The last line was a smart use of the word, potpourri. 🤗❤️

  • C. Rommial Butler4 months ago

    Well-wrought! I recall Larry McMurtry in a travelogue once writing something to the effect that when he drove through Missouri he thought of this painting and wondered if the next scene would be the grumpy old man stabbing his wife with the pitchfork or something. Ha! Some parts of the rural Midwest tend to have this effect on people, though I've also many fond memories of hospitality and joy from my rural friends and family.

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Bah humbug! But yeah. It's an equally valid side. Except potpourri. I mean, there is no potpourri in my actual life, not for at least three decades. Do folk still have potpourri?

  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    You have summed up the worst of the season in the most adorable way 😂

  • Cindy Calder4 months ago

    Thanks so much for the laugh. This haiku was just absolutely perfectly paired with the picture you chose.

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    Good job, but I do like the pumpkin stuff in small doses. I am ready though for a good pumpkin pie. We all have our likes and dislikes this time of year don't we.

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Yeah. Shove your pumpkin-spiced thingamajig and bury it in rotting leaves. Right?

  • Hahahahahaha this made me laugh so much! Loved it!

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    Yep. Go with it, John and vent here!

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Ha ha! Great entry, makes my curmudgeonly heart smile

  • I love this. It is so real and honest to the season.

  • Sandy Gillman4 months ago

    Lol! This is a great take on the challenge! No one else is talking about how annoying those leaves can be!

  • Lamar Wiggins4 months ago

    Tis the season, lol. Hilarious and accurate for a lot of people. Especially the raking!

  • Hahaha.

  • Gabriel Huizenga4 months ago

    Hahahaha - amidst a sea of reflective, wistful, flowery haikus (which I love and have no problem with!!) this is a hilarious and brilliant change of pace!! This made me chuckle, John - love it! :)

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