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Freedom

In Whose mind

By Antoinette L BreyPublished 4 years ago Updated 4 years ago 1 min read
Freedom
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Just like a little child You're running wild

A man in your life for a day Then you run him away

He cries You lie Soothing his pain

How can one man be such a strain, On one's freedom

He talks of commitment Flowers are sent You laugh at the thought Drink the wine he bought He cries You lie Soothing his pain How can one man be such a strain, on one's freedom You're not sure you even want to see him Nights in his company Your joy is empty He is trying to tie you down You want to play the town

How can one man be such a strain on one's freedom

love poems

About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Very strong message, I hope you are finally free that’s not healthy for you.

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