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Free From Fear (Pt. 2)

An Acrostic Poem

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Photo by Katie Pearse on Unsplash

I experience freedom when

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All around me

May be cleaned, vacuumed, polished

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Fragments of my own reality

Revealed in slick surfaces

Encircled by the reach of my desires

Every time

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With another added value

High intoxication from peeling paint on

Each unpreserved and improperly maintained surface

No wonder that

Each of the previous tenants has failed

Victorious can only be the one

Every time it dawns on me

Recalling the course of the action

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I ponder inside and over my books while

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Collecting dust from them

Lingering on the hope to read them all

Every now and then, the

Actual time will be given

Not yet while I quiver

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Meticulously and strenuously

Yelling to the beat of my favourite music, playing and

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Floating in the dust

Located everywhere, yet in just a few hours

Appearing to have another view

Transposed with my hands, duster, and vacuum cleaner

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    Oh no, Mescaline, now you've crossed the line into meddling! You expect me to clean AND read all the books gathering dust on my shelves???? And yet, I hear ya. Nothing makes me more ready & free to enjoy any &/or all of the arts than a clean space. And nothing makes me more ready to create than a messy space, if for no other reason than to avoid cleaning, lol!

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