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Free At Last

For the breakup nonet challenge

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Free At Last
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In huge ships with weapons, armor, greed

From far distant shores you came here

Took our lives, homes, our people

In chains, branded as slaves

Mastered by hate, fear

**********

Comes finally

Civil War

Lincoln

Free?

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About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oooo, this was so deep! I loved what you did here!

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