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A connection once so resilient,
We thought it would withstand it all,
Is now irreparable.
It cannot be restrung,
A thread so frayed,
And decayed.
Unraveled,
Undone,
Gone.
About the Creator
Alyssa Musso
A scientist by trade, but a creative at heart. One novel in progress with too many other ideas taking up space in my head. Some of those ideas end up here.
Instagram: @alyssa.n.mussowrites
My website! https://www.alyssamusso.com/
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Comments (5)
This is amazing!
This reads so smoothly! Like the unraveling of the thread!
Very descriptive.
Wonderful!!!❤️❤️💕
I love this… although I really want to switch the first two lines with each other and add a word to the third to make the symmetry perfect… I love how the poem descends in a kind of reverse pyramid 🤍🫶🏻