Form for a honey-bee
When you break up with the idea of using correct form for writing poetry
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Christina Victoria Craft on Unsplash
trapped in a lung that cannot get air
I need to tell you about it
So many things, I saw too
A bee that flew too high
I cried when he fell
“Icarus myth”
I fell deep
Lost words
Sleep.
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Comments (6)
This is one of those I feel like I need to read a good few times to feel like I get all the Stuff in there ☺
Oooo, this was so deep and poignant! I loved it Merly!
Nicely done. Love the "screw it" subtitle.
Creepy... Nice job!
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Oh nice! I love when people play with format and the 'rules' of writing! Really great take on the challenge and fantastic use of myth referencing (I'm a sucker for that!) 🩷