Forging Hope
Sometimes we have to make our own light

I was chained to this darkness for so long, that I forgot how to breathe.
I lost the memory of the light; a phantom limb of dreams.
I reached for it over and over again into that hole where my heart should've been, but all that was there was the shadow of who I once was.
So from that dark outline was something forged; hard as steel, as delicate as glass, and hollow on the inside.
For every miss-fired signal, I would strike the match.
For every hole left unhealed, I would stoke the flame
no matter how small the spark.
I've lost count how many years it took to build this fire;
enclosed in see-through glass, protected by steel bars,
but one day when I reached into
the crater of my chest
something was there,
finally burning,
ready to illuminate
that which I had once thought
lost forever:
hope.
About the Creator
Amanda Starks
Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
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Comments (9)
I loved this ending with that one final, resounding word—hope. So stunning. Congrats on your win!
Bravo!!! I see the flow and the connecting of the dots.
Amazing piece this really spoke to me congratulations on winning amazing writing style.
This hits deep and on many levels. I'm not a writer, but this was truly beautiful ❤️
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Beautiful emergence of hope 🥰 Congratulations on your win! 🥳
This is lovely. Congrats on your win <3
This felt like pandora's box. Such fear and darkness followed by a little hope! Very well done Amanda
That certainly took an uplifting turn! It starts off so sad, but then you give that little spark of hope at the end…what a perfect metaphor for the beginnings of recovering from depression. Incredible job.