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Forces

Interdependence

By Jessica McGlaughlinPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Sonnet of Shadows Challenge
Forces
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Darkness: defined by the absence of Light

Light: reciprocally, contingently bound

Manifest healing in quiet of night

Lost to the dark, in the Light, sight is found.

Nurture, reflect, move at the speed of trust

Knowing, leading, projecting the right path

Shut-out, undefined, somehow must adjust

Taking the reins and receiving the wrath.

Cut open holes to be out-shown by stars

User, arson, narcissist, hysteric.

Burn away essence, leaving only scars

Dampening flame; extinguishing merit

Destiny decreed forever for them

Interdependent. Alone in tandem.

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About the Creator

Jessica McGlaughlin

"The main thing is to keep the main thing the main thing."

A piece of paper taped to a wall of an elementary school said this, it really resonated with me.

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  • F. M. Rayaanabout a month ago

    Jessica, your poem beautifully captures the delicate balance between light and darkness. I love how you portray struggle and growth as intertwined forces, showing that even in our scars, there is strength and interdependence. Truly profound and moving!

  • RAOM2 months ago

    Through opposites, indeed, we are both cursed and blessed to struggle. To grow weary and to seek the flame of truth day and night. In light and darkness. Each of us a unique journey. When I read your works, my thoughts chase the stars 🙂

  • Darkos2 months ago

    Beautiful wonderfully expressed and written and Congratulations on honorable mention to You 🌞🙂💥🩷

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 months ago

    This is just stunning. Layered, eloquent, achingly beautiful thoughts all woven together into a deeply feeling sonnet. Congratulations on the honorable mention, Jessica - I would have given this one even higher honors!

  • Tanja Vasev2 months ago

    I have too been dwelling on darkness, there must be something in the air. Beautiful words <3

  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    Congratulations on your honorable mention! 🎉

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Aarish3 months ago

    This is so thought-provoking! I love the imagery of light and dark balancing each other.

  • Sandy Gillman4 months ago

    This is so beautifully layered.

  • Oooo, this was so profound. Loved your poem!

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