Nevermore the feeling of forced love
Gazing out at the water
Holding on, to my faith
Therapy should not be a necessity
Communication should come naturally
Why would we even want a third party
to guide our journey
100 an hour for blind guidence
dependence and faith which should belong to my lover
Our views some times conflicting,
Lead to nights of communication
reflecting, on the horizon
Of our future
A warm hug, even with tears
opens the path between us
A back rub- stress flows
Alone I feel -our partnership
Our trust survives through our strength
Even hours apart - in our souls, our love grows
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Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Comments (4)
Beautiful poem. I feel the calm resolution. Excellent! 🥰
Loving it!!!💕
Loved this poem so much! It was so wonderfully written!
Beautiful! A lot of truth in this one. Loved this line, 'A warm hug, even with tears, opens the path between us.'