For Your Boy's Birthday
Sometimes, even the best memories can break a heart.
By Cathy holmesPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
He's twenty-eight now.
You were pregnant that night. How
I Wish You Were Here.
Pink Floyd. Wish You Were Here.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (15)
Loved the poem Cathy!
This made me cry.
❤️✨
I'm so sorry. It must have been hard to write that piece.
Beautiful. 💕
I'm very sorry. Lovely haiku.
So much emotion...sending all the comfort and care :)
Very touching. I saw PF on the same concert tour on April 16, 1994 in Pasadena, CA. They were amazing and the light show was out of this world.
Oh this was so sad 🥺 Sending you hugs ❤️
A very heartfelt one ❤️ Love and hugs ❤️❤️
Great wishes still make great memories, and that's a great Haiku.
I’m forever lost on the dark side of the moon, this is great Cathy 😀
Heartfelt!!!💖💖💕
Beautiful
Sending hugs on this one. Song plays well with the emotion behind this Haiku.❤️