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Folded.

An Origami Creation.

By Tommy BallardPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Folded.
Photo by Fer Troulik on Unsplash

Sugar slicked via toxic lips

One hot breath, enough to transform into putty

To you, nothing but an exercise, a flex, performed with aplomb

How easy in your palm, to turn flesh and blood to origami

Sharpened edges, clean and pressed, in the shape that you ordained

A perfect sculpture, but nothing more, surely this can't be fair

Fragile and manicured, under constant threat from way on high,

Painstakingly formed into your flawless bird and told to never fly.

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For Poppy's Prompt #8, using all 5 words, (Sugar, Origami, Palm, Fair and Fly.)

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For Funsurreal poetry

About the Creator

Tommy Ballard

I'm a professional writer, a poet, a digital artist and an amateur musician. In my free time, I'm often be found pondering magnets, breaking and entering random homes to steal locks of human hair, and dosing snoring sleepyheads with Zyns

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  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    told never to fly - cracks my heart, very vivid - I watch birds each day. Great job!!

  • Poppy about a year ago

    Wow. "How easy in your palm, to turn flesh and blood to origami Sharpened edges, clean and pressed, in the shape that you ordained" That is breathtaking. And that ending was marvellously done!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    A nice poem

  • Manisha Dhalaniabout a year ago

    Brilliant writing

  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Interesting one

  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Nice work

  • Alyssa wilkshoreabout a year ago

    Loved it

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Oooh, I like it!

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