Fluff
of the
plant flies high
dandelions
spreading across lawns
to make wishes
that bring us
sweetest
fluff
Spread
hope they
whip across
the skies so fly
wishes full of hope
blow the seeds off
from the stem
will it
spread
Floats
to land
on concrete
no wish planted
no more power held
the wish seeds die
losing source
but more
floats
Still
some land
the wish holds
not quite as strong
if they all landed
but they will bud
a bit does
win here
still
Finished
here comes
a mower
the lawn to be
fresh for company
dandelion
cut too short
wish is
finished
Step
in an
open field
the next time to
make sure the wish grows
full potential
making the
further
step
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Seashell Harpspring
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Excellently crafted
Loved this poem.