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Flakes

A Senryū

By D. J. ReddallPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Some nights, you move through

The snow, and some nights, the snow

Moves coldly through you

Senryu

About the Creator

D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  3. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Amazing as always! Really feeling this one as the chill settles in and the snow starts.

  • Ah, that was so profound! Loved your Senryu!

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    No one can write senryus' like you DJ! 💌

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Like Cathy, I felt a chill reading this and yes, this resonated with me. Fine work as ever, sir!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    I got a chill. I know exactly exactly what you mean.

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Very deep Haiku!

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