First kiss 🍭
I have visualized the day you kindly kissed yourself into my memory chambers...
Dear kiss,
Why did you have to go to my core?
Your love is like sand, soft and kept...
You gave my soul true joy, on a day to day.
I want to save the glee...
That you sent me.
I know you must feel,
How odd is this, to cite a note
To a kiss 😘,
But I have not felt like this❗
You are the kiss that I miss🥹❤️.
You are the poem, I long to make.
Take me back to that day...
This poem is my Entry to the Short and Sweet Challenge organized by Vocal in July 2023.
Theme: "Write a love poem using only words with four letters or less."
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Comments (17)
Very sweet and romantic lovely job as always my friend!!!
"Take me back to that day..." that's soo deep, really beautiful
This was so inspiring, I loved it!! (You have the word silly in there, and that is five letters!!!)
Beautiful poem, great entry.
Nice work, very heart felt!
This is great, Kiss is certainly an expression of Love 💕💋
Very heart felt ❤️
That first kiss still haunts my memories today.
Wonderfully written. Love is a first beautiful & sweet!!!❤️❤️💕
You are the kiss that I miss. That line was so wonderful!
This is a great entry to the challenge!
Supercute lil bro! Well done!
Beautiful my friend 😊
sweet poem
very sweet
Very clever and sweet 💘
As always, love your work, Handsome. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, Mother