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First Heart

yeah its personal!

By BrenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

it might be real rubbish

every single cringey line

but when Vocal hits publish

that first heart is mine

a shot to the foot that i have in my mouth?

that there might just be a sign

but then when the piece is finally up

that first heart is mine

put enough polish on a turd

and you can make that bugger shine

and as soon as that piece goes live

that first heart is mine

i just hit submit like an autopilot twit

and pretend that everything is fine

a quick F5 later

that first heart was always mine

For Fun

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • zulfi buxabout a year ago

    The first heart was mine..very interesting

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    😂😂❤️

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Gotta live then hearts

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