Darkness
Darkness
All around
In my soul
No solid ground
Only darkness
~
Deep down
In the depths
Little embers glow
Waiting for the day
I remember them
~
A gust of wind
A breath
Blowing softly
~
Sparks
Small little sparks
Float into the air
Rising
Rising up
Rising above
~
Glowing
Glowing with a soft light
Lighting up a small piece
~
Hope
Hope
Hope is the wind
Wind makes a spark a flame
~
Growing
Momentum
Flames reach high
Way up
High up
Into the sky
~
You see
You hear
You come near
~
Heat
Heat runs high
You love it
You hate it
Cannot handle my light
~
Tame
Tame me
Maim me
Shame me too
Whatever you like
I'll do it for you
~
Quiet
Quiet whispers
My soul speaks to me
there's more to you
then the light you offer others
my dear
~
"Don't listen"
Slippery lips
Say to me
~
Tears
Tears
Salty streams
Leak down my cheeks
They will not stop
My heart starts to rot
They flow so long
The fire goes flat
~
The embers die out
The coals go cold
I deflate into nothing
But darkness
Darkness
The fires all gone
~
Different
"You're different"
You say to me
"What happened to your smile
Why don't you laugh with me"
~
Numb
Numb
Numb as can be
I feel
Nothing
Not even a breeze
~
Away
Run away
Cannot stay
Cannot play
Run away
Away
~
Alone
Alone again
It's just me
And...
Darkness
Darkness
Where is my flame?
~
Down
Deep down
Embers finally found
~
Breeze
Gentle breeze
Gusts of wind
Carry me
~
Growing
Growing
Growing faster
Faster than before
Bigger flames
Hot and bright
~
Never
Never again
Will I lose myself
Not for anyone
Or anything
~
I know me
I know she
~
I am the light
The lights within me
*
- Challenge: The Last Flame
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
A poet, if nothing else.
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
From my mind, to yours.
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Comments (2)
I especially loved the repetition throughout the poem. This was soooo powerful and profound. A brilliant take on the challenge!
This was devastating and then filled with hope. You really took us on an emotional journey - great challenge entry. As ever, you never leave anything out and always give your all!