It ended
The days of uni
All ended
The dying inside feeling
The living outside sensation
Sensation
Sensation
The fire
The flames
Of the passing time
Of the lasting crime
Of
Of
Of
Of -
Killing time
Burning it
It ended
The days of uni
All ended
All ended
Stuck in rumination
Forever locked
Or so it seems
Forever... locked?
Forever
Eternity
The movement of the flames of the future
Playing childishly with one another
Excited, exciting, alluring
The garden
The fire of the ending of the ending of uni-
The fire of the past-
The flames of the future-
But after the ending:
A moth comes visiting the flame of tomorrow.
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Maya Or Tzur
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"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl4 days ago in Fiction
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I love how you built "stuck in rumination" into your poem in different ways. It read like an echo. And you know what, this is exactly how I felt while I was at uni... like stuck in an endless cycle of I don't even know what, but time was passing crazy fast. It even reminded me of when I was studying stuff I had to but wasn't interested in, I memorized them by repeated it hundred times. I hope you don't feel like dying inside anymore, and you'll find jobs and new passions that make you feel alive 🧡