So massacre my self-worth, claiming
I couldn't love you forever
When we both know for a fact
You're the one who ran out
Of affection like
It was just a
Bottle of
Useless
Gin
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If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)7 days ago in Fiction
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The simile you used for this was clever and left me thirsty for more. Great work Poppy!!
Powerful words, Poppy. This is filled with raw emotion. Wow!
"A bottle of useless gin." Well said!
They fall out of love but blame us! The audacity! Loved your Nonet!
Yet another excellent heartache Nonetβ€οΈ.
Ugh, such a powerhouse of an image!