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I am falling from your memory
Like I used to fall into your
Calming presence, soothing smiles
And gentle, gentle hands
Now I try to coax
Past moments from
My mind but
Of course
Fail
About the Creator
Poppy
poetry in progress
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (12)
I love this one, Poppy! Tragic and beautiful!
So sad! this actually brought a tear to my eye!
Ah... the pain after the break up when the thoughts and memory flow too easily. So sad and we well written here Poppy!
Love this!!
Really a normal incident to feel everyone, good!!!!!!!
What a pain filled piece! Another great nonet, Poppy!
Beautifully written, yet so sad.
Yet another excellent nonetππΌ.
But eventually we'll succeed. Somehow. I hope so. Lol. Loved your Nonet!
Such a sad feeling.
Ah Poppy in some ways I love this competition and in others it makes me sad. This poem is so lovely but also really heartbreaking. Beautiful as always
this is beautifully written.