Final eclipse
Endless night
Eclipse: what if it never ended?
Can you imagine dread day of final curtain?
Living forever the shadow Luna portended.
Is it possible, lose Helios, Ra, Inti's certain
Presence, should Selene perpetuate her Solar union?
Surya, bless us with your glorious light,
Ever warm us, leave us not perpetual night.
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Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.
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I wish it never ended. Hehehehehhehehe. Loved your Acrostic!
Good work. I think with some of the names you used it could be a good way to introduce mythology or even constellations.
Should both moon & sun be fully waned forever from our perspective, what else besides all else would become waned with them?
Speechless piece of work
Astonishing take 🖤 Left me a bit speechless x
I cannot imagine if a eclipse become permanent. Nice acoustic poem 🙂
Nice work.