Fiery
2025 Story #15
Photo by Justin Cron on Unsplash
Like flickering flames
they flare along branches; cold
held at bay, for now.
I hope you enjoyed this poem! Check out my other autumn leaves haiku:
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Comments (7)
I love how this haiku burns bright with imagery and quiet reflection. It feels like standing under golden trees just before winter arrives.
Congratulations!🥳 A beautiful autumn haiku.💖
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I love the compared of those leaves to flickering flame. Such a beautiful Haiku!
"...for now", really love that ending 👌
Stunning work! 🧡🍂
Yes, they are like flickering flame. Nicely done