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Feathered Darts

through the window

By Andrea Corwin Published 10 months ago 1 min read
Image by Tommy Olsson from Pixabay

it seemed a truly aimed projectile

the wind was quiet, though

and I wondered, did the fir tree shake her arms

dropping her needles and throwing her cones?

a glance out the window to

review the scene, 

tiny darts land delicately, perfectly placed

revealing not a cone of woody scales

but a petite pine siskin, finely feathered

Copyright © 3/11/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin

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Andrea Corwin

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  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    This is incredible! And the birds are so cute!

  • Katie Erdman10 months ago

    I love this. You always paint the picture so well

  • C. Rommial Butler10 months ago

    Well-wrought! I see their cousins, the goldfinches, every summer, darting in and out of the brush, but haven't caught sight of many pine siskins around here. Then again, they would blend in pretty well with the sparrows, of whom I see plenty!

  • Caroline Craven10 months ago

    Love this - and siskins too. Great stuff.

  • sleepy drafts10 months ago

    This is so sweet!!

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    One that truly likes nature am I and this poem shows nature in all its' glory for the birds. Good job.

  • Md Mirajul Islam10 months ago

    good . please take a look at my profile

  • Awww, sooo adorable! Loved your poem!

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Beautiful words.. Did it crash into the window?

  • I wish we could experience more of such scenes here. We do have Flames of the Forest which shed lovely yellow flowers, though. Our way of heralding the season!

  • G. A. Botero10 months ago

    Beautiful. Reminds me of my walks in the park when all the birds are in the trees, shaking up the branches with their joy.

  • Lamar Wiggins10 months ago

    Such a cute bird, worthy of your words, giving it life. I also enjoyed the description -woody scales- for the pinecone.

  • D. J. Reddall10 months ago

    Your ornithological poems are always finely feathered!

  • Nice work. Question what was the trigger for this story? You peaked my interests. :)

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    lovely piece, Andrea

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