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Feast of the Unmade

A Descent into the Hunger That Consumes the Soul

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read

I woke in silence, thick and deep,

A womb of rot where dead things creep.

The air was bile, the walls were thirst,

I was the last, I was the first.

My skin was paper, thin and torn,

My ribs bent outward, black with worms.

I smelled the earth—not soil, but skin,

A graveyard stacked with those within.

"You are the last."

"You are the next."

"You are the feast beneath our chest."

I tried to move—I was not whole.

My hands were ash, my legs were cold.

A hundred mouths grinned where I stood,

Some whispering prayers, some choking on blood.

Then something breathed inside my chest,

Not lungs. Not air. But something else.

A second voice, a second mind,

A second pair of hands inside.

It gripped. It pulled. It peeled me back.

My spine unzipped. My eyes turned black.

My stomach split, the meat fell out,

A flower blooming inside-out.

And then I saw—it was not me.

I was the husk. It was the seed.

It stretched my lips, it screamed my name,

But I was gone—I’d been unmade.

I fell into the waiting deep,

Where bones were dust and mouths don’t sleep.

They wrapped around, they pulled me in,

A tide of hunger, skin on skin.

I do not breathe. I only choke.

I do not speak. I am the smoke.

I am inside you, slick and red—

A thing you’ll feel inside your head.

Your ribs will hum. Your veins will shake.

You will not know you're mine to take.

And when you wake with blackened teeth—

It will be me who breathes beneath.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    Wonderful ♦️♦️🙏♦️

  • Ina Zeneli11 months ago

    Stunning poetry: the rhymes and words are played together well. The message it evokes is deep and strong.

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    🩷

  • Kelsey Clarey11 months ago

    This is beautifully creepy!

  • Test11 months ago

    great job today

  • Andrew C McDonald11 months ago

    Deliciously creepy. The visuals are stunning. Great job.

  • Denise E Lindquist11 months ago

    Wow...

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