Feast of the Unmade
A Descent into the Hunger That Consumes the Soul

I woke in silence, thick and deep,
A womb of rot where dead things creep.
The air was bile, the walls were thirst,
I was the last, I was the first.
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My skin was paper, thin and torn,
My ribs bent outward, black with worms.
I smelled the earth—not soil, but skin,
A graveyard stacked with those within.
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"You are the last."
"You are the next."
"You are the feast beneath our chest."
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I tried to move—I was not whole.
My hands were ash, my legs were cold.
A hundred mouths grinned where I stood,
Some whispering prayers, some choking on blood.
—
Then something breathed inside my chest,
Not lungs. Not air. But something else.
A second voice, a second mind,
A second pair of hands inside.
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It gripped. It pulled. It peeled me back.
My spine unzipped. My eyes turned black.
My stomach split, the meat fell out,
A flower blooming inside-out.
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And then I saw—it was not me.
I was the husk. It was the seed.
It stretched my lips, it screamed my name,
But I was gone—I’d been unmade.
—
I fell into the waiting deep,
Where bones were dust and mouths don’t sleep.
They wrapped around, they pulled me in,
A tide of hunger, skin on skin.
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I do not breathe. I only choke.
I do not speak. I am the smoke.
I am inside you, slick and red—
A thing you’ll feel inside your head.
—
Your ribs will hum. Your veins will shake.
You will not know you're mine to take.
And when you wake with blackened teeth—
It will be me who breathes beneath.
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Comments (8)
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Stunning poetry: the rhymes and words are played together well. The message it evokes is deep and strong.
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