soft slippery silk stoppers sidetracking sight, sharpening senses
passion perfumes, perspiration pheromones permeating pillows
barely breathing, bated breath brushes by butterfly-like, body-beats bold betwixt blissful braided blending
tender tingling then trembling torment, thirsting throbbing towards tempered tension
hurried hankering hunger hushed, honeyed happiness honors harmony
for Vocal's Challenge:
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Judey Kalchik
It's my time to find and use my voice.
Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶a day ago in Petlife
Comments (9)
Hi Jk - Back to the head-to-foot body language, then. Mz-Uz..! Jk.bud.in.l.a.
JUDEY!!!!!! The cleverness of this piece has me absolutely floored!!! I love that you not only did the sensational challenge (extremely well I might add) but you also made each line a tautogram!! Just beautiful!!!
Cleverly written, tough to memorize but worth the attempt
Quite the set of tongue twisters you have written, but they do right off the tongue.
passion perfumes line immersed me.
Well, that's "hawt" as the kids say! I also like that you added an extra challenge of your own!
Hi there Judey, One day Vocal Support will return with an answer about why I can no longer add insights - I would have ticked every one. Totally absorbed, I re-read a number of times. Magnificent entry into the ‘Sensational II’ Challenge! Certainly you’re in the race for the win. Good luck!! With kindness Pauline 🌸 If you feel the inclination I would really appreciate feedback on either of my two entries. Number 1 ‘Her morning ritual’ : https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/her-morning-ritual%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Or just submitted! Number 2 ‘Dissociation’ : https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/dissociation-lv37b0xin%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Very nicely done, and kinda sexy.
Judey! is it hot in here or just me? I'm struggling to breathe after this. Sultry, romantic, sweet and tautogrammic! Well done, Ms Kalchik!