Fated Echoes
A Sky-Ku Challenge Entry
By Cindy CalderPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Fated lovers pause
‘Neath twin moons and starred skies as
Mirrored hearts echo
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Cindy Calder
From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo
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True image of echo in the sky. Excellent work of art with words
Beautifully written ♥
Just gorgeous, Cindy! Love the starry romance ❤️
Breathtaking!
well written, filled with talent
I never thought of your moon and my moon being different moons, each our own.
Beautiful Cindy!! I love the relatability of this and how gripping it is!! Such a great Haiku!
Such a beautiful haiku! Giving me soul mate vibes 😍
Simply gorgeous.
Absolutely gorgeous, romantic scene! A stellar haiku :)
This is kind of thoughtful in a way. Good work.
I have my own thoughts here. A double moon and a shared perception of the future of humanity. Multiple messages and rich imagination.
Gosh this was so beautiful! You never cease to amaze me!
Fantastic! ✨👏👍💥
The joining of the human with the cosmic. Very nice.
I agree with Michelle. These words belong together and paints such a vivid portrait of beauty.
This should be on a card on top of a lovely wedding cake. Well done.
Oh what a visual, how wonderfully lovely :)
Wow. This is beautifully written!
Charming piece! 😊
Nice flow.
I love the surreal quality of your Haiku, Cindy! The pic is an awesome addition to the poem! Great work!