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Fate's Slake Desiccates

Extraction: The Truth Isn't Always Free

By Thavien YliasterPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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"Tell Me Your Stories, Your Magic Is Mine."

The goddess gained access to my subliminal vault.

"Life I beget is gifted death. I made them cross the line."

***

Her eyes drank me in. I feel into her ocean, deep into the brine.

I was drowning of thirst, as she slaked me with her salt.

"Tell Me Your Stories, Your Magic Is Mine."

***

"No language could be concocted to have my atrocities defined.

I chose to beget and slaughter. The betrayal is my own fault.

Life I beget is gifted death. I made them cross the line."

***

My nature is not aligned to be maligned.

"I made, taked, consumed, I ATE!... All so I could exalt."

"Tell Me Your Stories, Your Magic Is Mine."

***

"You tried to rise higher than the divine?

Though You continued to descend You did not halt?"

"Life I beget is gifted death. I made them cross the line."

***

"Your attained descent must not be allowed to intertwine

with existence. Your behavior is not a normative default.

Tell Me Your Stories, Your Magic Is Mine."

"Life I beget is gifted death. I made them cross the line."

***

Thavien's Token:

"This poem was crafted for Mikeydred's - Mike Singleton's Vocal Social Society Villanelle challenge."

fact or fictionperformance poetryslam poetrysurreal poetryVillanelle

About the Creator

Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Beautiful and the picture is great for it as well!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I love the life I beget line, it holds such cyclical inevitability.

  • Wow, that was really dark and really good. Hope you win the challenge

  • "My nature is not aligned to be maligned." That line was my favourite. I loved your take on Mike's challenge!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is fabulous. Well done.

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Wow, wonderful villanelle!

  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    Thavien, love the way you've written this. Another wonderful piece.

  • This is excellent and the problem that a lot of people have with villanelle is that it is so strict but that it what it gives it power. I can see this being a Top Story

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    A very dreamy fantasy you created in such a short time! I actually read it twice. It only magnified its power the second time. Well Done!!!

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