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Where Does Yours Fit In

By Susan PaytonPublished 12 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
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The story of family and

The story of time

It's more complicated than life

It's no one's nursery rhyme

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But as sure as Jack fell down

And broke his crown

In real life it's victims

Do come tumbling down

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As sure as disagreements, hatred and

Divorce seem to rule

It seems the effect on mankind

Is inevitably cruel

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In today's world it seems

The problems that they may differ

From violence, hate and mass shootings

To opiate and drug addictions

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But as God as your witness

And time on your side

Reach out to one another

With dignity, love and pride

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Susan Payton

I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.

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  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    Wonderful ✍️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Beautifully said. Well done.

  • Gregory Payton12 months ago

    Nice poem, - well done!!

  • Beautiful, and I agree wholeheartedly!

  • Rowan Finley 12 months ago

    Beautiful symbolism! Thank you for sharing.

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