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False friends who don’t want you to rise

Snakes rule the earth

By Marie381Uk Published 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

False friends who don‘t want you to rise

Keep Your Enemies Closer

They nod like saints with sugar breath

tongues curled in gossip’s cradle

smiles wide enough to swallow trust

while watching who you lean toward

They sit close, call you sister

study every blink and breath

memorise your rhythm

then pass it on

to vultures waiting with knives

They don’t need to hate you

they just want to climb

and you’re in the way

so they smile, and bleed you slow

Every compliment costs

every hug hides a price

they wrap their spite in soft tones

and serve it up as concern

They don’t burn bridges

they light yours from beneath

then watch the fall

with wide, innocent eyes

They sharpen each move you make

into a weapon for someone else

cut your voice into headlines

and sell it for the thrill

So keep them close,

those velvet liars with dagger hearts

let them think you’re blind

then watch them slither away like snakes.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Calvin London7 months ago

    I hate snakes, but I loved your poem.

  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    Exactly, and the this is quite a poisoned pen poem. Good job if that was your intention.

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