False friends who don’t want you to rise
Snakes rule the earth

False friends who don‘t want you to rise
Keep Your Enemies Closer
They nod like saints with sugar breath
tongues curled in gossip’s cradle
smiles wide enough to swallow trust
while watching who you lean toward
They sit close, call you sister
study every blink and breath
memorise your rhythm
then pass it on
to vultures waiting with knives
They don’t need to hate you
they just want to climb
and you’re in the way
so they smile, and bleed you slow
Every compliment costs
every hug hides a price
they wrap their spite in soft tones
and serve it up as concern
They don’t burn bridges
they light yours from beneath
then watch the fall
with wide, innocent eyes
They sharpen each move you make
into a weapon for someone else
cut your voice into headlines
and sell it for the thrill
So keep them close,
those velvet liars with dagger hearts
let them think you’re blind
then watch them slither away like snakes.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (3)
I hate snakes, but I loved your poem.
Exactly, and the this is quite a poisoned pen poem. Good job if that was your intention.
I AGREE 100%.