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Falling Under the Sun

A poem about war on winter

By Alison McBainPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Falling Under the Sun
Photo by Joshua Earle on Unsplash

It burns, this fire of ice and snow and wind—

sinks claws into my throat

snakes tendrils up nostrils

and sandpapers my unfinished cheeks.

Perhaps it would be gentler if I loved it—

would caress instead of attack

would embrace instead of harm.

Perhaps acceptance will never change

what nature intended.

But I will make peace with fate

regardless of where it leads—

and this bitter winter will dog my heels

and make mockery of the brightest sun.

By Aaron Lee on Unsplash

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About the Creator

Alison McBain

Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/

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  • Euan Brennan8 months ago

    Great poem, Alison. And fantastic line! Having it tattooed now 😁

  • Nikita Angel8 months ago

    Very beautiful

  • C. Rommial Butler8 months ago

    Well-wrought! Is it still wintering up where you are, or is this a reminiscence?

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