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Fallen Echoes Rise

The Fallen Hero

By Mohammad Ali AhsanPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

From hero's grace to zero's fall

A fighter lost, off destiny's call.

Repentance echoes, a haunting toll,

Strayed from the path, a wounded soul.

Comrades missed, in battles shared,

Brothers bonded; strength declared.

Once a leader, now in shadows veiled,

Dreams shattered; glory curtailed.

Regret lingers, like a bitter taste,

Past victories, now laud to waste.

In solitude, memories embrace,

A warrior lost, in time's cruel chase.

Echoes of valor, now a distant hum,

Faded triumphs, where once they'd drum.

The hero's journey, an epic tale,

Now a somber dirge, a mournful wail.

In the echoes, whispers of might,

Gimples of a once-illuminated night.

A silent plea for redemption's grace,

A fallen hero seeks an alternate embrace.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Mohammad Ali Ahsan

I'm Ahsan, a poet driven by love for words, dreams, and timeless tales. Writing weaves my thoughts and emotions into diverse worlds.

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  • Test2 years ago

    Very creative!!

  • Anna 2 years ago

    Beautiful!😍

  • Rowan Finley 2 years ago

    Powerful writing. What brought this inspiration?

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