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Fall song

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By Judey Kalchik Published 4 months ago 1 min read
Fall song
Photo by Seth Hoffman on Unsplash

Swish: raincoat rustling

Sliding slipping: shoes shuffling

Golden between days

Haiku

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Judey Kalchik

It's my time to find and use my voice.

Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.

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  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    Remind me how a child would enjoy the fall

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    I can hear the sounds of each with each phrase. Good job.

  • I especially loved the alliteration in your second line+

  • A. J. Schoenfeld4 months ago

    I love the sense of whimsical movement in this Haiku. I pictured a small child discovering golden leaves floating in puddles.

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