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Summer is a leaf
Colors turned, floating on wind
Fleeting with its end
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The floating leaf carries motion without urgency. Wind is not forceful here; it is permissive. The poem understands that endings often arrive without drama, only drift.
A delightful autumn haiku… vividly portrayed.
This is beautiful! It reminds me of that short while, when autumn weather arrives and then suddenly it's summer heat again for a couple of days before autumn takes it back for good.
Very nice! I love how you cleverly use summer to describe Autumn/Fall.
Such a lovely metaphor 🍃
This was so beautifully written. Loved your Haiku!
Fab work TIW! ☺️
Excellent description 👌