Has it been a whole year already?
Forgotten you, forgotten me
Putting distance between us
The us that never was
Mistake of mistakes!
Buzzing my phone
Less and less
The pain
Fades
About the Creator
Tina D'Angelo
I am a 70-year-old grandmother, who began my writing career in 2022. Since then I have published 6 books, all available on Barnes and Noble or Amazon.
BARE HUNTER, SAVE ONE BULLET, G-IS FOR STRING, AND G-IS FOR STRING: OH, CANADA
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Comments (7)
This is so true!
Beautifully sad… thankfully pain and hurt can fade with time 🥹.
That's relationships for you, Good work.
'The us that never was' - Brilliant line!!! Well done
I love how those last couple of lines are so haunting, like they echo 😁
Yes, eventually, the pain fades. Loved your Nonet!
Quality lines and excellent choice of words