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Ever you do

for the ones who come back

By Sara FoxPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

An old rule says to set free what you love.

Cage it not, but give it room to grow,

as it is not for you to tame.

It may bend or bust, they say,

but mend it and let it heal.

So I do.

I let you go,

Send you out into life with only the hope that you will come back.

You go away as you came,

Like rain on a warm eve when the bugs sing but don't bite,

And I miss you, but am not sad,

For the old rule also says that you love me too if you are free but want to come back,

And ever you do.

love poems

About the Creator

Sara Fox

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    What a lovely poem to be reading so close to Valentine's Day. Well done, Sara.

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    This is so creative and lovely! Great entry!! 🥰

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    Hello there Sara. It is good to see another Fox. I have a Donna Fox that you should meet. You all can be foxes together. Great poem. Welcome home.

  • R.C. Taylor3 years ago

    This line, "Like rain on a warm eve when the bugs sing but don't bite" is so beautiful that I don't even have words to compliment it properly. A beautiful debut! Welcome to Vocal! :)

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