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Ever On

Breaking Free

By Thomas SpeerPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Road Drops Here Challenge
Ever On
Photo by Christophe Meyer on Unsplash

Aside a street with lamppost sending

shadows back toward the house

hammer strokes transforming nerve

from brittle ice to tempered steel

but no less cold, it coats the path

In bitter rime crushed under heel.

My cheeks are stinging from the chill,

Or is it just your hand, like thunder

Tearing through my courage still

I grip the lamp and crying, wonder.

You promised us eternity,

protection from the dragons, circling

in and out of time.

You promised me to hold my head

above the rising eventide

instead discard me to the sea,

the heartless cold lives on in me.

Ever on the pavement yawns

weave along the sighing alley

leave a song on your machine

the tune belongs in chapels, gone

“I’ll never hurt you”

Silly me.

Moonlight spills its precious blood,

Illuminating my retreat.

Drawing in the frosty air

The road and rime yields to the heat.

I take a step and then one more.

The road gets hotter as I roam

Though I may not withstand the flames

If once you loved me, you’ll stay home

heartbreak

About the Creator

Thomas Speer

I'm a God-fearing tumbleweed of a man, a gentle husband, loving foster parent, screwed up past and amazingly ordained future serving the Lord and expressing his revelation in my writing. Don't expect the dry and sanctimonious, though.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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