Nightcafe ai by Daphsam, Edits in Photoshop
Bob and Wheel Poetic Form
Here is how to write this style of poem.
• Quintain (or five-line) stanza or poem
• Rhyme scheme of ababa
• First line of two to three syllables
• Lines two through five have six syllables per line
Even In Hell
Embrace,
that we were vivacious
our love was a safe place
your cheeky flirtatious
kept me in a wild chase.
Had I known,
I followed you to here,
it was your serene spell,
captivating, my dear,
even if it's in hell.
Comments (5)
Gosh this was so poignant and relatable. You executed this form so brilliantly!
So poignant. A well deserved one.
Again, thought-provoking in ways that I am not sure. Good work.
Well-wrought! Reminds me of my favorite quote from the works of Friedrich Nietzsche: "A rich and powerful soul not only gets over painful and even terrible losses, deprivations, robberies, and insults: it actually leaves such dark infernos in possession of still greater plenitude and power; and, what is most important of all, in possession of an increased blissfulness in love. I believe that he who has divined something of the most fundamental conditions of love, will understand Dante for having written over the door of his Inferno: 'I also am the creation of eternal love.' "
Hey Daphne, this was a beautiful love Bob and Wheel! And I love the way it ended.A dramatic point.