The soul trembling with the fear of death,
Flowed into the stream of eternal peace after death.
When the soul tore through the body and emerged,
As if a bird had been freed from its cage.
The life force, wrapped in the peace of death,
No longer desires another body.
The soul wishes to dwell in peace for eternity,
In the calm consciousness beyond this speck of dust.
About the Creator
Karan w.
Writer || Poet || Author
Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever
All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations
The Ritual of Winter Challenge Winners
Welcome to the Winners Announcement for The Ritual of Winter challenge. This prompt focused on winter rituals and the meaning that settles into them over time. The top pieces stay grounded in ordinary acts and repeated routines, letting winter shape the work through pace, attention, and restraint.
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Brother, I'm sorry to disturb you... I just want to know if you have any suggestions on mysterious and fictional books... I've consulted many webs but I didn't find anything interesting. I've just finished reading 'The Do-Over' by Lynn Painter. It was a bit suspenseful but more of a rom-com. I thought you are a lot into fiction. Have you read any book that you could recommend me on fiction but Mysterious? I really want to read. 🙂
Excellent writing 👏🏾
Otherworldly and eloquent, well done 👏
So skillful the way you describe what it would be like, how it would feel when we part from this body. The freedom you expressed was on point when you said we will no longer desire a new body. I liked too how you visualised a place beyond this spec of dust, making the possibility very real.
well written, you were made for this
Everything is good in your poem so you deserve 1like
Amen. A very wise poem and well-written. The soul's need for happiness beyond the mundane and the ordinary is very touching. A very well-written poem as well.
Interesting piece
Super bro
I love how this poem captures the transition from fear to peace so beautifully. ;) The imagery of the soul being freed like a bird is really powerful, and the idea of finding eternal calm is so soothing. Such a peaceful take on something we all wonder about!
your thoughts on the "Spiritual World" are so immersing and the Idea of soul resting in peace for eternity is beyond beauty in true sense <3
Whoaaaa, that was so profound! Loved your poem!