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Eternal Orbit

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By BPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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eternal yet tragic love story ever seen,

casting their shadows over us

leaving us in tears over their pining,

if only to remind us of the

power of love;

soul-crushing and fierce,

even if the story is nothing more than a poetic metaphor...

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Acrosticheartbreaklove poems

About the Creator

B

I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖

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  • Susan Payton10 months ago

    If only to remind us of the power of love. Nicely Done!!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    It happens that way sometimes just barely pass by each other scientifically.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    ah yes. never the twain should meet, until those occasions come by. Well done Brin on another exceptional entry. Love it!

  • So poignantly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Still it has the power to move our hearts. And if our hearts might be moved, so might the mountains themselves.

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