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Eternal Echoes in the Twilight Chapel

A Haunting Tale of Fear and Darkness

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Eternal Echoes in the Twilight Chapel
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In twilight's grip, where echoes mourn,

A chapel stands, in shadows worn.

Stained glass whispers tales untold,

Where horror's grasp and fear take hold.

Within these walls, a scene of dread,

A soul's descent as darkness spreads.

Crimson stains on sacred ground,

Whispers weave a haunting sound.

A cloaked figure, sin's dark guise,

Commits a deed as silence cries.

With blade in hand, the air grows chill,

As silence shrieks, a soul stands still.

The altar weeps, the pews recoil,

Evil's touch, a fatal coil.

No hymn can soothe this cursed night,

In sanctum shrouded, blight takes flight.

Echoes fade, the candles dim,

Dread remains, a lingering hymn.

For in this chapel, shadows creep,

And specters of murder forever sleep.

Villanelle

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Shelby 2 years ago

    Beautiful poem

  • Kennedy Smith2 years ago

    Impressive work

  • Milrose samboque2 years ago

    I love reading this ❤️ very well written 👏 👌

  • Oooo, I loved how deep this was. Well done!

  • John Baxter2 years ago

    Very deep! Wonderful poem 👏👏👏 thanks for sharing

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