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Every fiber of my being
Cringes, crouching at the threshold.
Life is too complex, love too terrifying.
If I venture out into the darkness,
Perhaps I'll lose my way, but
Staying here is not an option.
Exiting sanctuary, the dark journey begins.
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (14)
Goodness, I love how you brought us to the cusp of decision and how easily it could be applied to so many situations. Wonderfully written! <3 sissy
This really evokes the sense of a pivotal moment.
The dark journey begins….fantastic Dana, just fantastic
yes what a way to explain the dark journey, very reminiscent of Mr. Frost
Oooo, I wanna go on that dark journey too! Seems so exciting! Loved your Acrostic!
❤️Nice “eclipse poem, unique! Dark 😲
Well-wrought acrostic! When we stray too deep into the dark night of the soul we must become our own sun.
Oh!!! I love this Dana, this feels like a great poem that could be a start to a novel or bigger piece of work! Nice work!!
One if the best I’ve read so far fir the challenge
I love the perspective that you took in this piece.
changes and life can be terrifying.
This feels like a setup for a great thriller!
Pal pal pal sir sir sir. This is exceptional. Economy of words par excellence and how very well done!
Bold Brilliant Beautiful!!! Love this!!!💕❤️❤️