My soul's erosion,
Like wave-beaten rocks of home.
Unreachable, home.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
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wow... I felt the words!
Oof, this hit me hard. So powerful!
Ah! our souls. Got to keep them alive.
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Wow, I really, really love the concept of your “soul’s erosion.” Powerful; great job!
Oh my, that is sad. Great haiku
Beautiful and sad at the same time💙
Nicely done my friend.
This hits the feels Great job
Beautiful Cathy! ❤️
Ah, that's so sad. Great work!
Well done.
Melancholy!!! Left a heart!!!