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an old poem...some friday feels...happy new year

By Louis Cruz JrPublished 4 years ago 1 min read

this emptiness:

the cradle i built for myself has fallen over and

the child now sprawls on the floor broken and sobbing

alone

consider me a cup of milk spilled

see me forlorn and tired

i punch brick walls and leave blood stains

you can now see the white of the bone in my knuckles

this crawling, gnawing emptiness

blooms a black lotus

devouring

the life giving sunrays

devouring my smile

devouring

everything that was once good

devouring

the only glimmer of hope

devouring

the love i still feel for myself

devouring

every fleeting memory of happiness

devouring

until there is nothing left

sad poetry

About the Creator

Louis Cruz Jr

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