I know your laugh from across the room
My eyes find yours, and blink to say
How good it is to see you
Your wave beckons me close
And then I meet him—
He holds your hand
The same hand
I held
Once
About the Creator
Ethan Town
Sometimes I say creative writing is a hobby of mine. I guess that means I have to write sometimes.
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Comments (16)
Beautiful!
Nice. Congratulations on the Top Story.
nice one, full of emotions
Goood job!! Genuinely a novel can be written in the theme of your simply elegant poem, may be if you allow I would like to write a fiction with this theme.
heartbreaking - I can visualize this event through your poem, sad.
I love everything about this <3 Congrats -well deserved <3
master piece
Heartbreaking. Congratulations on Top Story!
Great piece
A very fine poem. Congratulations!
That's a special kind of sadness. Beautiful poem! Congrats on the Top Story!
Wow, congrats!!!!!
Nice piece! Please check out my last story and give me some feedback as well :)
Ouch! Well done. Congrats on the TS.
What a great piece!
Great entry!