Emotional Roller coaster
Riding the Highs and Lows of Life's Emotional Journey
We rise with hope, hearts reaching high,
Touching the stars against the sky.
The world below, so bright, so clear,
Our dreams feel close, no trace of fear.
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But soon we drop, the fall is fast,
We question how long joy can last.
The weight of doubt, the sting of pain,
And once again, the storm, the rain.
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With every turn, we hold our breath,
Facing each twist as life tests depth.
In darkest hours, a spark appears,
A light that grows from facing fears.
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For every low, the climb returns,
Through every trial, a lesson learned.
Embrace the ride, both joy and strife,
For ups and downs, that’s simply life.
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So hold on tight, through every bend,
This wild ride won't break but bend.
And in the chaos, know this too:
Each turn brings strength that carries you.
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Comments (4)
I always dreaded roller coasters, and in this piece, you showed why. You described it perfectly. Excellent job.
Isn't that what life is all about in a way. Great writing.
Interestingly, this is exactly how I have been feeling lately, and searching for a way to express it. This is so perfect. Thank you for uplifting the spirit.
I’m excited to share my latest poem, Emotional Roller Coaster, inspired by the tumultuous nature of human emotions and the wild ride of our experiences. Life's ups and downs can feel overwhelming, yet they play a vital role in shaping who we are. In this piece, I delve into the complexity of emotions—joy, sadness, fear, and hope—illustrating how they often coexist and influence our perceptions. The metaphor of a roller coaster beautifully captures the intensity and unpredictability of these feelings. While writing this poem, I reflected on personal experiences and sought to resonate with universal emotions. The imagery of a roller coaster effectively conveys the rush and chaos that often accompany our emotional journeys. As I revisited moments of vulnerability and resilience, I was reminded that it’s perfectly okay to feel deeply. Each emotional twist we face contributes to our growth and understanding. I hope this poem resonates with those who have experienced the overwhelming nature of their emotions. Remember, you are not alone in this journey! Sharing our experiences can foster connection and empathy among us all. Best , Dr. Jay