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Elysium in twilight

Echoes of lost bond...

By AnweshaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Serene

In a realm where green meets endless skies,
Our family found a home, where beauty lies.

A warmth envelops, healing every woe,
A tranquil balm where gentle breezes flow.

Nature's canvas painted rich and bright,
An immortal drink, a pure delight.

Emma, a native, you unveiled the greens,
You linked my soul to nature's vivid scenes.

But little did I know this cherished place,
A haven where our souls could truly grace.

Was taken from you, leaving silence deep,
A mystery in shadows, secrets to keep.

Why couldn't I play by your side in glee?
A bond unformed, lost in what could be.

In this ethereal beauty, we might have danced,
Yet fate intervened, leaving us entranced.

Now I wander searching for your light,
In the echoes of nature, both day and night.

That dark complexion and those amber glowing eyes,
Was the exact definition of beauty, that everyone tries.

Since the day, we were torn apart,
A shadow lingers in my heart.

With every moment time does sway,
But memories of you won't fade away.

In the velvet sky, as our memories gleam,
Every night I converse with the stars, making a wish.

Constellations woven in dream,
I send my hopes on a silvery beam, hoping you would hear me, or so it would seem.

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Anwesha

The one who showers every plant, keep trust in that gardener's chant.

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  • Komalabout a year ago

    Wow! Such a lovely and beautiful poem Anwesha 🤗 I like the rhymes you made in it✨

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    "Elysium", I learnt a new word today! Thanks for that <3 Plus the poem is super fascinating, girl 💕 Loved it!

  • Vaibhav Raiabout a year ago

    Your words paint a vivid picture, you are a wordsmith!

  • Thanosabout a year ago

    Well that's why we celebrate sorry day...but that's not enough to commensurate for the loss that they'd suffered. BTW your poem is amazing 😍

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Superbly penned and loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Wonderful✨

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