Mountain in my view,
ground touching the pure blue sky.
Marriage of difference.
Bridge to that blue sky,
flying in that pure blue void.
Rocks bringing me down.
Grounded to the rock,
I jump back into the air.
Floating on my dreams.
Rocks between my feet,
moss clinging to the hard rock.
Water dripping down.
Rain begins to fall,
turning the dirt into mud,
cooling down the temp.
Fire falls from the sky,
meteors light up the night,
framing the mountain.
Air meets the mountain,
fire submerged in the water.
Elements together.
About the Creator
Colt Henderson
I usually write horror.
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Comments (8)
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Creates a beautiful visual ❤️
Stunning! I love how this poem really transports the reader. Beautiful work.💙
with all the haiku together like this, the rhythm and cadence kind of feels like climbing a mountain, one step, steep step, two step, one step... very nice
Wow, this is amazing, beautiful, and so creatively done! Love that you expanded it with haikus :)
I really liked how you turned this into a whole story, while maintaining the proper haiku format for each set of three lines! An interesting take, and very vividly written.
Very nicely done.
Beautifully written!
Impressive!!!