electric silence: reframed
senryu experiment.
By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
the gasps and the gaps
the aching space between thoughts
electric silence
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Author's Notes: Sooo...experiment time. Had an idea that although the first time I posted this it was framed romantically - helped along with the image - it had been eating at me that it could be taken a different way, with a different image - less romantic - in fact, the opposite. So here you go.
Here is the original for reference:
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Comments (9)
Love the tone of it.
Very clever… as always ✅
Oh! Okay hmmm. Well done.
Ooh yes, both ways!
Oooo, it definitely less romantic this time! 🍩🥐
Well played, sir! Loved this second take, well done... again.
And twice the reads! ;0) Jokes!! I think I prefer the first. Hope things are going well in your world.
Ahhh, man, Paul. First you give us a delicious bit of lovey, dovey and then bust our chops with a dose of reality. Just teasing! You are deviously clever. Sort of like those images that can be seen two different ways like the old woman/young woman illusion or the loving cups.
Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️