Edge of the First Frost
A fleeting breath of warmth just before the world turns to glass

The day thins out to parchment by the lane,
A milky sun hangs low, without much gain.
The air has teeth that test my naked throat.
A quiet bite beneath my wool-wrapped coat.
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Leaves huddle damp along the gutter’s seam,
Soft leather, bruised, half-melted from their gleam.
They smell of earth and apple cores gone brown.
Of bonfires cooling on the edge of town.
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A distant bus sighs brakes in cloudy rings,
Its doors exhale the heat of crowded things.
That warmth drifts past, a bittersweet perfume.
Of wet wool, metal poles, and a crowded room.
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I taste old rain and something newly clear.
A mineral chill that sharpens every fear.
The sky turns pewter, slick as river stone.
Streetlamps ignite like seeds of borrowed bone.
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A puddle skins itself in fragile glass.
It crackles softly when my footsteps pass.
The grass turns stiff, each blade a rigid wire.
Holding the memory of a late-day fire.
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Somewhere, a gate clicks twice and won’t quite close.
A lone bike wheel ticks slowly as it froze.
The world draws in its colors, dim, precise,
Balancing, breath held, on the lip of ice.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.




Comments (1)
Beautiful words. The way you capture atmosphere here is incredible.