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Eclipsing Death

Our Path Of Totality

By angela hepworthPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

earth will die in just a moment

crushing, killing us like fleas

listen, watch, and try to own it

ice melts on our hands and knees

pretty winds and rising seas

storms will whip around in psalm, when

everything is gone

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To anyone who may come across this, thank you so much for your kindness and support! Everyone’s been so sweet and helpful on the site and it’s so heartwarming to see.

This is just a darker twist on the In Eclipse challenge; I’ve been having tons of fun reading and writing poetry for it. Anyone who hasn’t submitted yet should definitely check it out!

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About the Creator

angela hepworth

Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!

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  • Joe O’Connor2 years ago

    A warning of what’s coming if nothing changes:/ This one is sharp but rings so very true.

  • KVarnas2 years ago

    Your gratitude is truly heartening! It’s fantastic to hear that you’ve been enjoying the In Eclipse challenge and finding joy in both reading and writing poetry. Your enthusiasm is contagious. Keep shining bright with your creativity!

  • Oooo, I absolutely loved how dark this was! Fantastic work!

  • This is a poem which turned my school science and geography lessons into a poem!!! So thank you.

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Holy sh** FABULOUS! And NO LIE - so many warnings and no one listens.

  • Environmental concerns meticulously presented in a poetic form.

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