I can still hear
the echoes of our lust
lost in the dark
crawling and begging
to be let out into the light
kiss me deep
hold me down
slip your hand
under my gown
let me know
how much you want me
***
as the sound transverses time
lands in your ear
taste me
bite me
tell me you want me
the ghosts won't tell on us here
***
put your hand
on my neck
my favorite necklace
besides your teeth
that mark
what is yours
and what is mine
***
run your tongue
down my spine
now is the time
for the echoes to be silenced
About the Creator
Jazzy
Follow on IG @jazzygoncalves
Head of the Jazzy Writers Association (JWA) in partnership with the Vocal HWA chapter.
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Comments (8)
Very sensual, vivid. Loving the flow of this piece.
Beautifully sensual. Well done.
Kiss me deep/hold me down/slip your hand/under my gown - sublime.
This is sexy and beautiful. Wonderful flow too. Well-done.
This is amazingly written.The first line had me completely hooked
Sultry and juicy language - and the title is slamming!
Oooo, this was soooo hot! Awesome poem!
Not you making adult me blush.